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Linda S. (Tucker, GA)
Bitter River: Bitter Reading
The blurb about "Bitter River" by Julia Keller held such premise that I eagerly awaited my advance copy. A voracious reader, I prefer literary novels but read cereal boxes if one is placed in front of me, and unfortunately, this book reads no better than that provided by my morning Cheerios.
The main story centers on solving the murder of a teenage girl in rural Appalachia; two sub-plots bring more depth to the main character. While the characters were very human and the setting a part of the story, too much of the writing feels forced to me, the author trying too hard. Many of her metaphors miss their mark ("Her hair was the color of a dirty Q-tip" – ewe!), deus ex machina carries one of the sub-plots, and the ending is contrived, neatly tying up all three story lines. In the climax of one of the sub-plots, the main character, a woman lawyer, knowingly goes unarmed and alone to a house where someone is firing an assault weapon – really? I get it that Bell is a tough broad, but ultimately her story is not worth my time.
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Aleksandra E. (Alpharetta, GA)
At times entertaining...at times annoying
I enjoyed the character development & the building mystery found within the beginning of the book. Learning about the characters in this small town was initially intriguing although at times I found them difficult to keep straight.
What I could not understand and did not enjoy was the story sub-plot. I found it ultimately irrelevant and distracting. In the end, I never got that "ahaaa" moment I was so hoping for.
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Judi C. (QUARTZSITE, AZ)
Bitter River
Set in the Appalachian Mountains of West Virginia, Bitter River centers on solving a pregnant teenage girl's murder in the small mountain town of Acker's Gap in Rathune County. Belfa Elkins is prosecuting attorney of Raythune County and although the story is told in third person, it is mostly her point of view; her thoughts on returning to and living in this small mountain town.
When Bell learns of the dead girl, she is driving back from Washington, DC after spending a brief amount of time with her own teenage daughter now living with her dad (at sixteen, she had a choice as to which parent to live with and thus chose to get off the mountain).
The dead girl is Lucinda Trimble, a star student being raised by her off-beat, hippie mother, Maddie, who lives in a cottage on Route 4 with a perpetual yard sale of home-made trinkets. "Maddie Trimble was everything Bell Elkins despised about some of the people who lived in this area. She had raised eccentricity to an art form, and helped perpetuate the stereotype that 'mountain folk' were exotic characters running around in bare feet and cutoff shorts, mixing up weeds and herbs to make nutty potions intended to heal everything from heartaches to hemorrhoids."
Sheriff Nick Fogelsong is Bell's counterpart in the investigations and a good friend. But the two of them get off to bad start with this investigation. Nick used to see Maddy years ago, before Maddy started seeing Lucinda's father. That was over seventeen years ago, "Except in these parts, the story never ended. No matter how long ago it was, Nick Fogelsong had a link to Maddie Trimble, a tie. When he talked to her these days, Bell thought, he probably had to raise his voice a little bit to be heard over a soft confusion of echoes." Nick has a blind eye to Maddy... and Bell bluntly points this out.
There are two other main story threads running through this novel. Bell's sister was released on parole nearly 5 months earlier after almost 30 years in jail for killing their father. Bell expected to pick her up at the prison and take her back to Acker's Gap to help her get back on her feet, but when she went to get Shirley, Shirley had already left, and did not leave any contact information. Bell feels confident that Shirley will make her way back to Acker's Gap and thus is compelled to stay there until she does. The reason for Shirley's imprisonment and the debt that Belfa owes here sister is backdrop to help provide an understanding as to Bell's reasons for being/staying there.
The third thread involves Matt Harless, an old family friend/neighbor from when Bell and Sam were still married. On Bell's latest trip to D.C., she is surprised when Matt joins them (her ex-husband Sam, his girlfriend and their daughter, Carla) for dinner. As it turns out Matt has retired from the military and needs time to decompress and wants to see Acker's Gap, the place that he heard so much about from Bell all those years ago when they used to run together. As it turns out, Matt has as many secrets as anyone in Acker's Gap. And may or may not be involved in the a tragic explosion that occurs about halfway through the book.
Although this is technically a murder mystery, it is a literary one in that the setting plays as much a role in the story as the characters. Bell (or the author Julia Keller) shares insight into this community, such as the familiarity of people, the long memories, the fact that "In a small town everybody is next of kin to everybody else." She also spends a bit of time reflecting on the socio-economics and the inherit problems. For example, she explains how the prescription drug problem is far worse problem than the more widely known Meth problem --- and why it is more difficult for law enforcement to deal with. Or, "The fact that over half of the children in Raythune County go to bed hungry a night..." And even reveals a bit of interesting history as to how West Virginia because a state under Abraham Lincoln.
Julia Keller creatively uses metaphors to bring home a point. But to be honest, some of them just left me scratching my head as I tried to figure them out. For example, "The flounce and swoop of his accent reminded Bell of a dust ruffle on a bedspread." Huh? Or "Her hair was the color of a dirty Q-tip..." (I prefer not to think on this one too long.) and "she heard a faint and sustained jingle in the distance, almost a choral singing. The sound, she knew, came for Paw Paw Creek..." (Choral singing? Please, just give me the gurgling brook!)
But every now and then she comes up with some really good analogies: "Gossip leaked out of a county courthouse like chicken broth through a slotted spoon;" or "Dumping coffee on an empty stomach-- which she'd just done-- was akin to walking in a biker bar and calling the first guy you see a candy-ass. Just asking for trouble;" or "Seeing Wendy Doggett in a cell in the Raythune County Jail would be a little jarring, Bell had assumed, like finding escargot on the menu at White Castle."
From the start, it is assumed that the murderer is someone that knows Lucinda. "Statistics tell the tale, folks. Look around. You've got a heck of a lot more to fear from that person sitting right next to you on the couch night after night than you do from a stranger hanging out in a dark alley." Even at that, in a small town there are a lot of people that know this girl, and thus a lot of suspects to get through.
"Small towns, Bell thought. Jesus."
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