The story concept is intriguing but I could not picture the characters well. I define a good story by being able to clearly see the people as real people. I kept trying to picture the sisters, the mother and the older woman. Maybe they were left vague so each reader can
…more weave their own description.I know Sheila was troubled and shackled by the rope either as a possible suicide attempt or a threat of imprisonment and death. I do like stories like this as I am a Stephen King fan and others of that genre but the story kept missing the mark. I would encourage the author to keep at it because I really kept hoping for more. Keep going!! You will do it and I will look for more from this author. (less)