BookBrowse Reviews Death with Interruptions by Jose Saramago

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A fable set in a land where no one dies, by the Nobel-winning author of Blindness

"The following day, no one died," begins Death with Interruptions, and the rest of the novel scrambles to catch up to this extraordinary new reality. Before the first deathless day is out, the cardinal calls the prime minister to upbraid him for celebrating the body's new immortality. The end of death means, after all, the end of the Church, "since this was clearly the only agricultural implement god possessed with which to plough the roads that would lead to his kingdom." What will the state do if death does not return, asks the cardinal. What will the Church do, asks the prime minister in kind. The cardinal answers smoothly, "The church has never been asked to explain anything, our specialty, along with ballistics, has always been the neutralization of the overly curious mind through faith." Death's disappearance reveals the struts propping up the everyday world.

Saramago's unnamed nation becomes a self-contained wonderland in which the new rules must be discovered by testing them. The citizens learn that death is only suspended for humans, and so undertakers revive their comatose businesses with elaborate pet funerals. The citizens further discover that death operates normally outside of the nation's boundaries, and so the mafia handsomely profits by secretly transporting elderly relatives across the political border just long enough for them to cross the spiritual border, an unsanctioned kind of euthanasia for families with means. The evaporation of death is, for this droll novel, a fall into pure narrative. Death with Interruptions charges into the story but remains hovering over the nation in a birds-eye view, delivering a fast-paced plot with virtually no individualized characters or sense of place.

It is a fable, and in the absence of humanistic characters, we are left with the persona of the storyteller to entertain us. The narrator is a disembodied presence who simply cannot refrain from breaking into the story with formal circumlocutions that do nothing so much as announce his or her existence. Consider this passage:

"It may be that a very genteel upbringing, of the kind that is becoming increasingly rare, along, perhaps, with the almost superstitious respect that the written word can instill into certain timid souls, has prevented readers, although they are more than justified in showing signs of ill-contained impatience, from interrupting this long digression and demanding to be told what death has been up to since the fateful night when she announced her return."

Death's return, I will not dally in telling you, occurs in the form of a letter whose style the narrator describes in terms that are clearly, wryly meant to be self-referential:

"…the chaotic syntax, the absence of full stops, the complete lack of very necessary parentheses, the obsessive elimination of paragraphs, the random use of commas and, most unforgivable sin of all, the intentional and almost diabolical abolition of the capital letter, which, can you imagine, is even omitted from the actual signature of the letter and replaced by a lower-case d."

If you can tolerate sentences that go on for pages, the effect is charming. It reads as a precise blend of Gabriel Garcia Márquez and David Foster Wallace.

If the narrator is ambiguous, death, when she finally arrives in the novel, is fully realized right down to the toe bones that clack on the floor as she walks. When she decides to restart mortality, she adds a new provision: now, everyone will get seven days' notice of their own death, time enough to settle their affairs and say their final goodbyes. It is here that the panoramic vision of the novel starts to seem odd, as if the single most fascinating thing about Saramago's surreal time and place were its administrative details. The narrator too enthusiastically describes death's filing system and the way it automatically updates itself with each detail of each mortal life. "And it shouldn't astonish us in the least if, at the very moment we were reading our own personal file, we saw instantaneously recorded there the sudden pang of anxiety that froze us." The panorama has turned into a panopticon*.

And so the novel sags in the middle when the narrator can do nothing but narrate death alone in her magical office. This section embarrassingly culminates in a conversation between death and her scythe. But when one of death's notices comes back to her unopened and the man for whom it was intended does not die on the date marked in his file, the plot restarts, this time with two characters in the throes of life. Death sheathes herself in a body and visits the undead man, and the conversations between the two of them are utterly riveting. Again and again, death surprises herself with what she is willing to do for this man who has a power of which he cannot conceive. By the time the narrator has finished with her, death has brought the novel around to yet another fabulous terrain. The ending casts the first sentence in an entirely different light, and I closed the book in triumph and delight.

*For an explanation of panopticons, see the sidebar to The Disreputable History of Frankie Landau-Banks.

This review was originally published in The BookBrowse Review in November 2008, and has been updated for the October 2009 edition. Click here to go to this issue.